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Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Formal Presentation Feedback


This report is about a presentation has been done by the students:  Saeed Alnaebi (H00155113) and Ali Alkatheeri (H00154993). The presentation took place at T002. The presentation started at 8:40 and ended at 8:55.

Saeed’s and Ali’s presentation was about the Global Warming. They introduced their topic in a simple clear way. They talked about this problem to show the audience how series the global warming is. They started their presentation with a good clear introduction. They also mentioned the points that they will be talking about in their presentation and proposed practical solutions.

They had a good start although they didn’t get the people attention so fast. However, they had good choice of words and nice language. Also, they mentioned good examples. They had very good eye contact and good gestures. Their visuals were good, but there was a mistake where they stopped the presentation and asked the teacher if the slide were working. Actually, they shouldn’t do that. Instead, they should have just kept presenting without referring to that technical problem so they don’t distract the audience. Another negative is that sometimes they look into their slides and they had problem with switching between points. The good thing is that they gave real life examples. They finished their presentation with a good short conclusion.

In conclusion, although they commit some mistakes, but in general it was an excellent presentation. They showed the effort that had been done in this presentation. Overall, both Ali and Saeed have a great delivery skills and my only advice for them is practice more and more.

1 comment:

  1. Sultan:

    Good work, next time check the deadlines! Good luck with your tests.

    Gregory

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